Comments From Class Crit

Today i have presented my entries to the class and these are the comments that I got back

• Voice could be edited
• Could use someone else for voice over
• Voice over is too long
• Keep everything and use text to explain actions
• Remove voice over and only use to explain key concepts
• Title screens are cut too short
• Can use images of ipad and tv
• Rationale doesn’t need to be so long
• Remove intro
• Could ad music over the top , try incompetech

Therefore after looking at the comments from classmates my plan is to

• Cut out my voice over
• Use self explanatory titles
• Show my other animations
• Place music over the top
• Cut down the length of my rationale