The sequence I showed is the entery before this titled "Compleated Sequence Modified", and here are the comments I got for the sequence
• Scrap the little boys reaction
• Film some more and make them shorter
• End on the footage of your dad
• A tag to the end “sorry for the shopping dad”
• Like the scrap book style intro
• it’s a cleaver way to start the sequence so people know what’s happening
Therefore my plan is to scrap the little boys reaction, film more and make them shorter and finally add a note on the end of the sequence saying sorry to my dad about the shopping.
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