Storyboards Animatic

After developing my 40s/50s america idea i have done an animatic of the storyboards. the process that i have illustrated is

Cloud comes in
Starts rumbling & shaking
Cracks in half
You see a bucket & it pours out water
Pours into sive
Sive creates rain
follow the rain down
Hits rockey surface & slides down
Striked by lighteing
Tran: the white of the lightening ceates a transition
Two mountains come up and a lake starts flowing
The lake turns into a spring between 2 mountains
A person uses a pipette to get some water
Clips pipette to a production belt that’s moving around a lot
Drops it in the carton drop by drop
Cartons come out in stacks on the production belt
Trans: Zoom into one carton
Zoom out to reveal the carton in a fridge
you see someone at the side on a bike generator. Creating power for the fridge
Someone picks up a carton buys it at the counter
Goes out a revolving door
Starts drinking the carton
The animation changes to film focusing on the aquapax